Bless Your Breath [Completed Work]

[Anon-P]

I spent about two months working on this on and off because I had final assignment for college (and also procrastinating by playing Genshin instead) but, it's finally done

ENJOY!

[Dumaan089]

1 hour ago, Anon-P said:

I spent about two months working on this on and off because I had final assignment for college (and also procrastinating by playing Genshin instead) but, it's finally done

ENJOY!

A pretty FUN and AWESOME show (well, that's common for you haha)
I like the lasers going crazy and those few but nice water effects, and obviously the fireworks that together with the lasers provide a very nice color palette
I hope one day I can do a show as BEAUTIFUL as yours ;)

[JB]

I like how your set evokes a circus big top with just the bare minimum framework. 

[Anon-P]

8 hours ago, Dumaan089 said:

A pretty FUN and AWESOME show (well, that's common for you haha)
I like the lasers going crazy and those few but nice water effects, and obviously the fireworks that together with the lasers provide a very nice color palette
I hope one day I can do a show as BEAUTIFUL as yours ;)

One day, buddy. One day

[wolfpaw]

Pretty fun show, something I've noticed in this show that was vastly improved from your previous ones is the use of colors. You had some great color combinations and color schemes throughout the show that were constantly dynamically changing, pyro choreography was also well done! This show gave me some vibes that reminded me of n7's Break. Lighting wasn't bad, though it was very concentrated in the center, allowing for some whiteouts in some sections but with a stilt-like set you have you didn't have many options for lighting so I understand why you went with that route.

I can only echo what I've said before in past shows regarding the soundtrack as it isn't really my cup of tea though I do appreciate the less use of batteries and more hand-crafted choreography this time around. I also noticed that this is a 360 show which I think I would have liked to see more of a play on the 360 element of the set, I noticed you swindled the camera a lot from side to side but never actually played with the full rotation of the set that a 360 show could offer. Though again I can understand why as 360 shows are very difficult to pull off correctly and are a massive pain to work with.

Overall pretty good show, while the music is still a bit off-putting for me I can't deny that the pyro choreography and color combinations have improved! Great work!

[Anon-P]

On 8/26/2024 at 12:37 AM, wolfpaw said:

something I've noticed in this show that was vastly improved from your previous ones is the use of colors.

Yeah, turns out observing how @Kablary did the color gradients on his recent shows proves beneficial to me

[Kablary]

Okay, now that I've finally watched this, I can say that it is so nice - like a breath of fresh air - to see much more dynamic color palettes being used. The pastel color tones throughout were really lovely, though with the heavy laser work, you did end up with quite a bit of whiteout in the center of the set. Lighting used on the ropes of your custom scenery were clever, though I think they contributed to the whiteout at times.

Your rapid-fire sequencing has finally returned, and that is always a treat to see! The camera movements were also nice, though I'll echo what Wolfie said about a missed opportunity to have the camera pan a true 360 degrees around the set. I won't comment on the music as I don't understand what they're saying...but you could watch this show on mute and still enjoy your choreography and coloring!

[jaronimo.mov]

Just catching up on this—it was truly a treat to see this come from you! I loved the hands-on choreography like others have mentioned, and I love that set also! I wish there was more camera involvement like others have mentioned also but I think this tight choreography and expansion of color usage was pretty spectacular! Thank you sooo much for this!